That one was also really good i hope u keep writing ^^

Ok, try this --> http://mortanierpoetry.blogspot.com/

Its shorter and its based on a real person. Her picture is beside the poem and the poem is different from the "fair lady" poem.

it wood be awesome for the link for blogger ^^

Oh yeah, i've written 1 other. The fair lady one is still a work in progress though, that was a rough draft after a few minutes. I wrote 1 and posted it here but i also have a link for it to my poetry blog on blogger, which link do you want(for the post on blogger or for here on TeenHelp) ??

Hey, I'm Renee. I read your poem, the fair lady one, I loved it and was wondering if you've writen anything else