lol you got lucky :P once in a lifetime for me lol

Not when I reply a day after I turned it in :P

I turned it in the day after i asked for criticism, which was when it was due :P

your welcome
wow your an over achiever lol
yesterday huh isn't that counted as late... lol

Haha, thanks, and I edited it after posting it so I may have already fixed it up. And it was kinda due yesterday, but oh well

wow good job man
that is a really good piece!
I'll pm u my edits

http://www.teenhelp.org/forums/f22-s...ive-criticism/
Thanks very much

yea send it to me

Haha, me too, but I hate writing when rushed or to a topic that I don't choose or can't relate to. Luckily though it's over a picture so mine's about relating to music on an extreme level. Actually would you be kind enough to proofread it real quickly? I'm determined to get a good grade and get an A in the class >

I do what I can

haha yea i rather enjoy writing in general lol
my friends think im crazy when i can push out a poem in 30 min because it takes them FOREVER to write 3 lines lol

i love that lol its hilarious!

Haha, I know, it's just that I'm so used to hearing people complain about the time they had to put into it that it seems taboo to actuallly enjoy it.

And if by fascinating you mean leaves you with a bunch of pretty marks then definitely
I've been fascinating for 8 years, lol