Re: Black. --- "Spoken Word" Poem --- meant to be read aloud. -
February 9th 2013, 04:04 PM
Reading this out loud made it come into moving pictures. Like it's happening to me in real life. I was able to understand it more. But not just what you meant of the poem, of what it's actually like to feel pain. To view how dark a life could be. I believe this poem should be read to high schools and such so teens can understand what people go through, adults too. So they can switch their ways of behavior and treat people right. Many lives could be saved if all those people knew what was wrong and stopped the problems from growing. That said, this is an amazing piece. You have done such great work. I really love this piece!
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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