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Name: Dez
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Re: Give Me A Chance (Poem) -
December 28th 2012, 04:29 AM
I really like the poem and how you used repetition in it! Great job! I'm sorry to hear about the teacher though. Don't let him get in the way of what you love. 
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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