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Name: Dez
Age: 28
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Location: Connecticut, USA
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: Untitled Poem :O -
September 12th 2012, 11:28 AM
This is really great, don't put it down.  It is powerful and it did its job if it helped get your emotions out. I like the last line, how you put "Except being accepted." I don't know why but I like the way they sound together.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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