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Re: This is me (try at a poem) - September 10th 2012, 11:56 PM
Thanks everyone. I fixed up the ending though:

Let me in,
can you hear me over the din?

It's getting cold out here,
so let me in, be a dear.

Yeah, it actually illuminates how I actually feel at the moment, I want help, I want to be able to "get out of the cold" but I feel as if nobody will actually let me in. My depression haunts me, never leaving me, always stalking me and waiting to strike when I start to feel bad again.

Thanks all, I always thought poem writing would be just beyond my grasp, seems like I reached for it :P

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