Thread: Triggering (ED): Let me tell you a story.. (Poem)
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Re: Let me tell you a story.. (Poem) - September 9th 2012, 09:11 PM
I really like this poem, it's a great personification of an eating disorder because they really are scary like that. I especially like the final line, that one word "happens". It stands out because it doesn't rhyme and it really shocks you, which is also what EDs do. You write really well!