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Feline the love.
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Age: 26
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Location: salem
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Join Date: August 25th 2012
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Re: What do you think of my poem? -
September 5th 2012, 12:13 AM
Thanks for all the good feedback  I've posted another one under 'self expression' It's called 'Silent Screams' I will post poems as often as I can. I would like feedback on that, too please.
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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