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Gotta keep your face up.
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Name: Dez
Age: 29
Gender: Agender
Pronouns: They/Them
Location: Connecticut, USA
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: Poem 5 -
August 30th 2012, 11:42 AM
I really love this and just the word choice and mood you put into this. You did a great job of rhyming as well. I liked the second stanza the best. Keep it up! 
The sun is always gonna rise up
You need to get up, gotta keep your head up
Look at the people all around you
The way you feel is something everybody goes through
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