|
Re: Poem 5 -
August 30th 2012, 10:42 AM
I really love this and just the word choice and mood you put into this. You did a great job of rhyming as well. I liked the second stanza the best. Keep it up! 
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
|