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Re: Poem 4 - August 12th 2012, 02:52 AM
I really like this! You did good with rhyming and using word choice here. I liked your uses of Sister Fate and Sister Fortune.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive