This is a poem I wrote and I need some honest to goodness opinions. Constructive criticism is encouraged and please don't tell me it's good if it's not because no offense but that doesn't really help. Thanks do much sorry if I was harsh.
all comments are welcome.
Drowning*
Cold
Wanting to scream
But nobody hears
Numb
Dark
Alone
Reaching for the light
Fading*
Slowly dimming
Falling
Sinking
Losing the strength
To continue to struggle
Endless darkness
Consumes the body
Fear
Lost*
Gone
Forever dark
Silence