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Re: new work: lullaby i wrote "Dream Of Paradise" - June 8th 2012, 01:58 PM
This is surprisingly good, I am very impressed, keep writing and posting!

Also, I'm sure it's a typo... "a ace where lvers go to cry"
"a place where lovers*?"

"My heart is warm with friends I make,
And better friends I'll not be knowing;
Yet there isn't a train I wouldn't take,
No matter where it's going."

- Edna St. Vincent Millay