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Condom Queen
Jeez, get a life!
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Name: Traci
Age: 32
Pronouns: she/her/hers
Posts: 7,405
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Join Date: October 29th 2009
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Re: Fist pound -
June 1st 2012, 03:51 AM
I like this a lot, I can see the story very vividly. I might work on the rhyme scheme a bit, it's a bit Dr. Suess like, but I really love the theme! You have a talent with words. 
something burning?
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