Thread: Triggering: (self-harm & rape triggers)My Master
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Re: (self-harm & rape triggers)My Master - May 31st 2012, 04:01 PM
I think that's very good. Some of the rhymes don't quite work but I think that it is very good anyway. You paint a very vivid picture. My favorite line is the one about her sweat being the elixir you need. You should def keep writing