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Re: Starting from Scratch - June 7th 2018, 01:49 AM

I liked this:
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I am now starting from scratch,
Removing myself from the battlefield
Finding an escape; a refugee shelter to stay
Relearning what life is about;
Why I am here, what is the purpose
How to be a free human person.
And this:
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It burns me inside
I've been so distressed trying to survive
Giving myself the love I've been deprived
Slowly learning how beautiful is hope
Running out of resources; Not sure how much longer I can cope
Do I keep choosing life and building myself up?
I can definitely feel the frustration and desperation in this piece of work. Hope you write more soon.