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Re: Just these intense feelings put on a page - November 4th 2017, 10:28 PM

This is awesome, so powerful. It’s well written as always but I especially love this part and this stanza here.

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I can imagine building confidence
How they will probably be excited too
They can use me to their favor
And get me to do for them what they want me to do
Always enjoy seeing stuff from you!


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers