Re: Poem -
June 7th 2017, 01:18 PM
I agree, there's definitely a story here. I liked the repetition and the mentions of doing it for control. Keep hanging on.
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
|