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Name: Hollie
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Re: success -
May 21st 2017, 12:10 AM
This is really good. I especially like the rhythm towards the end where you have the three rhyming lines. It also puts a twist on what success is. I hope to read some more soon. 
"Why want another universe if this one has dogs?"
Matt Haig - The Midnight Library
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