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Re: High School - May 20th 2017, 07:48 PM

Hey Jess!

I really liked this. I was a little hesitant to read through all of it at first because I am not best at concentrating but i am so glad I did and it flowed well.

I love how there seems to be some kind of circular motion with reflecting on what high school means change, then the different freedoms. Then realizing you've changed so much.

And then the last stanza was great too because you wrapped it up really nicely.

I just liked the whole thing overall. Keep writing!


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