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Re: ready or not -
March 3rd 2017, 03:58 PM
I saw the title and instantly thought of hide and seek. I love how you make references to things like that in your work. I like how you wrote this; I can see it all when I read it. I liked the ending was well, about her still being a girl inside. I think people will be able to relate to that.
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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