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Re: Untitled Poem -
August 28th 2016, 02:52 PM
I enjoyed reading this. I liked how you used shattered and scarred in the first stanza, and how all the words sounded when I read them.
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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