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#radpenguin
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Name: Leonie
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Location: Behind you
Posts: 108
Join Date: April 17th 2016
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Re: if you can live again - a poem -
August 24th 2016, 04:47 PM
I had very high expectations after you first told me that you write poems and you didn't disappoint! Life really is a black-and-white silent film sometimes and I'm sure many people can relate to the images you described. I love the build-up toward the end and this is just a great piece of writing 
Hakuna matata - it means no worries for the rest of your days.
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