[Agirlwithafeelingforgirls]

I wrote this for the love of my life, Hailey. I think this may help me prove my love to her.

The girl with the pretty brown eyes,
She loves her some fries.
She has long brown hair.
I think I see her everywhere.
Even if people stare,
From here to there,
I'll follow you anywhere.
I love you.

So? Honest feedback!


Update: I changed the poem a bit!
The girl with the pretty brown eyes,
we'll still be talking when we die.
She has long brown hair,
I think I see her everywhere.
Even if people stare,
From here to there,
I'll follow you anywhere.
I love you.
Better?