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Re: not sane - a poem - April 4th 2016, 05:32 PM

This is very powerful. I like the part about the religion they're forced to call a home, and the part about how to tell someone you've lost your brain. I can tell by your writing that you have a lot inside your mind. I hope you continue writing so you can get it out.


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers