[Storyteller.]

Originally Posted by Halcyon

Just a few minor things. Also, I noticed that sometimes you write 'Dad' and sometimes 'dad'. Is it okay to change them all to 'dad' to keep it consistent throughout? I have highlighted them in orange.

I'll take responsibility for this, sorry. I tried to change it so that "Dad" by itself was capitalised, whereas "my dad" was not, as that's the way I was taught to do it (since in the first instance it's a proper noun but in the second it's more like an adjective). If you'd prefer to do it differently please let me know and I can edit it and reverse those changes for you.