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But I'm just a ghost.
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Name: Dez
Age: 30
Gender: Agender
Pronouns: They/Them
Location: Connecticut, USA
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: Better Off Dead... (Poem...Kinda) -
November 10th 2015, 03:31 AM
Heya,
I'm moving this to Self Expression because this is more a piece of creativity that gets out your emotions than it is asking for advice. 
That being said, I can tell that there is a lot of emotion behind this piece. I like how you ended this and I also like some of the questions you asked and details you used.
-Dez
Oh, you are not useless
We are just
Misguided ghosts
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