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Name: Dez
Age: 28
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: Better Off Dead... (Poem...Kinda) -
November 10th 2015, 04:31 AM
Heya,
I'm moving this to Self Expression because this is more a piece of creativity that gets out your emotions than it is asking for advice. 
That being said, I can tell that there is a lot of emotion behind this piece. I like how you ended this and I also like some of the questions you asked and details you used.
-Dez
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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