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Re: Better Off Dead... (Poem...Kinda) - November 10th 2015, 03:31 AM
Heya,

I'm moving this to Self Expression because this is more a piece of creativity that gets out your emotions than it is asking for advice.

That being said, I can tell that there is a lot of emotion behind this piece. I like how you ended this and I also like some of the questions you asked and details you used.

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Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive