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Re: meh poem "desert" - June 11th 2015, 03:33 AM

You did a really good job on this and it isn't "meh" in the slightest.

I really liked this part:

Quote:

I bite my lips knowing the truth
I must face the desert and pretend
that the wind does not pelt punches every which way I turn
and every which way I go that the sun does not burn