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Re: New poem -
May 19th 2015, 08:59 PM
This is amazing. It's really emotional and I like the little bit of repetition you have in there. I like the way you ended with a question, and something about this line just made me stop for a second.
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I couldn't even whisper that I wanted to shout
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If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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