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Re: poem again - April 4th 2015, 08:51 PM

I really liked this part:
Quote:
You can't keep sitting here
Cracked lips and little pinky
Still stuck between the hinges of the door
That the wind slammed in your face
As you ask yourself the burning question "but why?"