[MsNobleEleanor]

Okay. Did you want me to make the changes and post it back in the black colour for changing, "mum" to "mom" and put the "pint" and "year" in brackets?

I can fix it up if this is what you want.

Also did you want to leave child-line the same or change it to Kids Help Phone or another place?

I was more concerned for making it not identify you because you stated it very well. However, I don't think there is much "bad grammar" because this is your story and how you present yourself in telling it.