[Storyteller.]

Like Adam, I am so happy you posted your thread quickly; thank you so much! It's people like you who make my job easier. I'll wait for you to respond to Adam's edits before I make my own, but for now I just have a minor concern, that being that I feel like you use 'college' and 'university' interchangeably, when they can actually be quite different. So, again, either be very specific (ie. just college) or more general (for example, you mention that college is four years, but that doesn't hold true for everywhere - my University degree is three years long, and my sister's was five, so some systems are obviously quite different).

I know all of Adam's colourful edits may be a little off-putting, but please don't let that deter you from continuing with the process. This is a really great first article, and we've got at least a month to work on it (and as it's your article you are of course allowed to reject any suggested edits), so please don't let Adam scare you off.