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Re: another cheesy poem -_- -
September 16th 2013, 09:59 PM
Yeah, everyone is critical when it comes to their work because they know all of the places where things COULD be worded better.
I personally think it's not bad at all, maybe needs some accenting. But I guess it's in the style.
I moved back while
my head was turned.
Upside down
closer to the end.
Afraid of the dark
within future times.
I'm drowning there,
my final chase.
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