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Re: Untitled Poem -
May 26th 2013, 08:21 AM
I always get all giddy when you post stuff.  I know I'll love it. And yet again, I do! I honestly don't see how you could edit this. It's really amazing, honest.
One thing, towards the end, you have this:
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Self harm is a way of life for you now, and
There is no escaping this. You've done it this time, baby.
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I think it might look better without the "and". Doesn't seem like it fits well. Otherwise, you wrote this amazingly and I don't think it needs edits. Good work, Dezzyface. 
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