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Re: Poem for my English class: Thoughts? - May 14th 2013, 08:52 PM

I won't try to edit it because I don't want to mess anything up with it, but I just wanted to let you know that this is really well written and I bet your teacher will like your writing style.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive