I really like Plastered on Fake Smile. This line: “Now when you smile it'll be real” doesn’t quite flow with the rest of it, in my opinion though. Still a great read!
The cutter prayer is so relatable, definitely one of the best written and worded
SH poems I’ve read.
In “Skin Victim” I really love this line “Correct the mess of this life you've made”
I can also very much relate to “Come Little Girl” you did a great job. You’re a strong writer!