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Re: Poem not sure what to call it -
March 10th 2013, 07:31 PM
I totally agree that poems don't have to rhyme. I think what matters most is that it conveys the emotion and gets the message across, and yours totally did that! I also like the name "Revive." You did a beautiful job!
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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