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Poem not sure what to call it - March 10th 2013, 11:38 AM
Hello everyone

I SUCK at rhyming but love writing so I wrote this free verse. Tell me what you all think and if you can think of a title name. Any type of constructive criticism is more than welcome ..

Will I ever see the sunrise again
I can’t take it anymore
Tears streaming down my face
How many times will I scream
The pain is overwhelming
You left me alone
When I needed you the most
Now my heart is broken
Into a million shards
Pinching my insides

Will I ever see the sunrise again
Day time seems too far away
I could hardly reach the moonlight

Save me from myself
Save me from the pain

Or I may never see the sunrise again



“I’ve missed more than 9000 shots in my career. I’ve lost almost 300 games. 26 times, I’ve been trusted to take the game winning shot and missed. I’ve failed over and over and over again in my life. And that is why I succeed.”
- Michael Jordan

Do not let what you cannot do interfere with what you can do.
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