[LadyPoeticJustcice]

Depending on how poetry is viewed it is similar to songwriting. However, for this being your first poem I believe you really mastered the skill by capturing your raw emotion on the negative aspects of the music industry. I love the use balanced use of repetition. You used just enough for the rhyme scheme to stick in your head and without sugar coding what you wanted to say. This poem is beautiful because it speaks the truth. *sorry the response is so long*