To My Brothers Girlfriend.

[littlejoker]

I know something for sure,
Your nothing but a whore,
Your broke my brother into two,
Why did he even mess with the likes of you?

You messed with both of our minds,
Everyone thought you were so kind,
You made us loose our sanity,
You took him away from me,

Everyone got wrapped up in your lies,
No one saw the look in your eyes,
Your were the devil, oh so sinister,
Nobody thought you were monster,

My brothers going to fix himself,
So you can go fuck yourself,
He now knows what you do,
He won’t mess with the likes of you,

So you can leave you fucking whore,
Because now I am sure,
The apologies won’t matter,
My brother knows he can do better!

[Jovial.]

This is really interesting; I liked it.

[Solivagant]

I love the rhyming and the use of "whore". It gives a strong edge to the poem.

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I really love this poem, I can totally feel the emotion.