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Saoirse September 28th 2013 12:19 AM

A Lonely Boy's Life
 
Time is fading fast for you friend
No chance for resurrection
A child no more
Innocence gone

Overwhelming emotional sickness
Unhealthy for the soul
Somehow you can't rid of
You always gain more and more

Stress and anxiety
Too much to handle
Frowned upon by society
Constantly rolled up into a ball

Loneliness is too much
No one seems to care
Leave this boy alone
You should not have to bear

Lack of trusting
Always hurt by others
If it's not clear
He tries not to bother

Sadness fills his heart
Joy is falsified by his facial expression
Does anyone care?
The ultimate question

by Connor (AKA frostwav)

Not_here September 28th 2013 12:24 AM

Re: A Lonely Boy's Life
 
This is a good poem, I especially like the last 2 stanzas!

ViceOverVirtue September 28th 2013 01:16 AM

Re: A Lonely Boy's Life
 
I really liked this, especially the ending. I'd love to read more from you:)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ September 28th 2013 01:20 AM

Re: A Lonely Boy's Life
 
This is so emotional, and I agree about the ending!

coolkid98 September 28th 2013 01:03 PM

Re: A Lonely Boy's Life
 
I really like this and agree about the ending. I look forward to reading more of your work, your an a amazing writer.

DeletedAccount69 September 28th 2013 05:03 PM

Re: A Lonely Boy's Life
 
This was really good. Thank you for sharing. :)


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