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Red and white canvas.
A blade ,
A white canvas , Her arm the canvas Grab the blade Paint a picture 5, 6, 7, 8 Lines all neat and straight Her picture made A work of art It came straight from her heart She'll make another picture tomorrow. |
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Wow, Lydia. This has to be my favourite poem you've written. It's so... I don't have the word for it. It's amazing. I absolutely adore how you turned SH into a work of art. Because for some people, that's what it is. It allows readers to really understand a person who SH's. This is incredible.
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This is really nice! I pretty much agree with Lynds' comment here. :D
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so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Really good, thanks for sharing:)
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This is really good!! Amazing. I agree with Lynds. :)
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Even though this is a shorter poem, it's still so powerful! Thanks for sharing it:)
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Lynds said it perfectly. :) This is an amazing poem and I'm so glad you decided to share it with us.
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You did a great job writing this Lydia :)
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Wow.. this is amazing!
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Lydia, this is beautiful. I love the analogy between SH and art. You are a wonderful writer, keep writing.
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