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Dry Your Eyes
Dry your eyes
Nobody can hear your cries Look at me look at me look at me Can you not see how good you ought to be ? You little shit You'll take this hit and a few more Afterall you deserved it you asked for it Dry your eyes Nobody can hear your cries Keep that mouth of yours shut You tell, make it worse I'll beat you till your begging me to stop Black and blue Dry your eyes Nobody can hear your cries Not now anyways |
Re: Dry Your Eyes
so powerful its i amazing poem
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Re: Dry Your Eyes
This is a great read, I love the message yo uconvey here :)
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Re: Dry Your Eyes
Lydia,
Hey there love. This is a really great poem. It has a lot of emotion, and I can feel the pain of the girl whilst reading the poem. If this is about you, and the abuse is still going on. I really suggest you report it, so that it stops. Keep up the writing. <3 |
Re: Dry Your Eyes
It is about me but its pretty much stopped now. occasional argument here there but that's normal the violence has pretty much stopped.This poems mainly about the past.
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Re: Dry Your Eyes
Very powerful poem there hun. I love it, I can definately feel the emotions in it. Keep up the great writing. <3
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Re: Dry Your Eyes
Lydia, this is pretty powerful. It's short, but it portrays so much emotion. I can feel the rage and anger in this from both perspectives. I know many can relate to you. Keep writing. You're so good. :D
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Re: Dry Your Eyes
This is really powerful and I can feel the emotions so well.
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