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January 16th 2012, 04:14 PM
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Writers Block Condition: Dead. WOO.
With her eyes closed, throat sore, and a mouth full of cold rocks
You can see the glow of the joint in her hand, she can't stop
Life's in lock, feels lost, still stuck in this pot
That she's been swimming in since the last time she looked at the clock
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January 16th 2012, 04:46 PM
Feeling trapped and watched
Almost as though shes inside a fish bowl
She tries to find a way out
None prevails
She slowly fails
She sits on the floor
And screams I can't take this anymore.
'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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January 18th 2012, 04:38 PM
Contradiction, is killing her slowly
Trying to forget she needs a new filling for holy
Feeling lonely, her cieling is folding
Reaching for her soul she's leaping for the trophy
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January 18th 2012, 09:34 PM
The trophy of death
It defies her
Who she is
What she wants
Where she wants to be
With a bunch of pills
And a strong will
She says her final good-bye
She let out a defeated sigh
And a tear fell from her eye
'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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January 21st 2012, 08:20 PM
what this heartache is all about.
and just when she went to turn out the light
the knight once again returned to fight.
fight for the girl he had loved so
even though her heart he smashed
like ice upon the stone
with rage and fire she spat at him,
"you hurt me and you lied"
and the velvet moon above them wept and wept
the velvet moon had wept
flower
hello my heart where have you been
I missed you when you left
you ran away with that senseless boy
and left me dim and dry
like a faded flower in the mist
Come back my heart. you have a home here
In this place that is my soul
I want to feel like whole again. don't waste your time with him
Have faith my heart. You'll get a second chance
come back to me and you will not be alone
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January 21st 2012, 10:29 PM
As the moon wept
taking his sword
she made him watch
as across her wrist it went
this is what you've done to me she said
her knight he stood there jaw dropped
with every pill she popped
he saw life slowly slip away
too scared to pray
he watched the night turn into day
the stars have gone
he sings his song
about a girl who's life was oh so wrong
'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
Do you wanna come with me? 'Cause if you do, then I should warn you - you're gonna see all sorts of things. Ghosts from the past. Aliens from the future. The day the Earth died in a ball of flame. It won't be quiet, it won't be safe, and it won't be calm. But I'll tell you what it will be: The trip of a lifetime!
Don't trust a perfect person and don't trust a song that's flawless.
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April 23rd 2012, 09:55 AM
He sings the word to his song
'Oh beautiful girl , when did your life go wrong
if I'd have known, I'd have watched you grow , I'd have helped you along the way
Oh beautiful girl, your life went wrong, now here I stand singing this song'
I know I must move on
Give me time and I will
Not yet though, it's too soon .
'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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May 15th 2012, 05:50 PM
Lonely and lost,
if a child, he'd cry
but see the world,
not through blurry eyes.
Behold a new world
sing not anymore,
unless the song you sing
shows beyond the gold shinning doors.
If you ever need it, I'm here to help, talk, or whatever! ~♥~Kyle †
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May 21st 2012, 06:16 PM
Will the poor little girl ever find her way back to that happy place?
Back to the place where everything was okay. The place where
everyone was happy, including her. She is faced with an answer.
(So yeah, I realise I'm a bit late but I figured I'd give it a bash anyway)
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May 29th 2012, 05:29 AM
Up ahead she sees a rope of black armour floating in empty space.
It's length filled with the sorrow of mistakes.
Stretching up above into eternity, like waiting for someone to follow it's lead.
Slowly it starts convulsing, a light inside it radiating and pulsing.
Out comes a voice which sings a familiar song.
'Oh beautiful girl, when did your life go wrong'.
Last edited by Dawnfire; May 29th 2012 at 05:50 AM.
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May 30th 2012, 12:04 AM
As she wails, the sound carries to the ends of the earth,
All she wants is a form of rebirth,
The doubt soon gets to be too big to bear,
She feels like her happiness becomes more and more rare
(Hey guys, hope you don't mind me joining in!)
<3, Nikki
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I <3 being me!
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June 1st 2012, 10:21 PM
the world has open her eyes
the light now shines
her hope has grown
andn she feels alive
Used to be Misslostintears
If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here.
I've been around for a while now.
If someone tells you that something you love is wrong,
THEY ARE WRONG
IF someone tries to destroy your dreams,
SHOW THEM THAT WHAT THEY DO IS NOT GOING TO STOP YOU
YOU ARE YOUR OWN BOSS,
IT'S YOUR LIFE,
LIVE IT YOUR WAY!
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June 18th 2012, 12:30 AM
her heart reaches for freedom
tears swelling in her eyes
happiness presents itself
in the stormy skies
I wanna fly. So I do gymnastics instead.
I'll just keep holding on to what i believe and oh I believe in you. Give me the strength for the fight and the heart to believe cause I've got to believe in you. I feel so alive.
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July 25th 2012, 11:55 PM
And she shall sit upon the hill
facing west where he lover was ill.
and though in pain, she breathes in deep,
to find happiness at least is a giant leap.
When you can't find your way home,
and when life gets too hard to face on your own.
I will stand as a light through the darkness unknown,
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July 28th 2012, 06:25 PM
she looks at the blade while it sits in her hand,
then she looks out at the boring old land.
and with such pain she starts to cry,
it's just not time yet to say goodbye.
so she gathers herself and goes for a walk,
she meets a new girl so they sit and talk.
the girl as well felt really alone,
so the two new friends walk toward home.
When you can't find your way home,
and when life gets too hard to face on your own.
I will stand as a light through the darkness unknown,
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August 13th 2012, 07:44 PM
Together as one as good friends should,
now they both felt they're understood.
Nothing can break a bond so strong,
a friendship as this can be a lifetime long.
When you can't find your way home,
and when life gets too hard to face on your own.
I will stand as a light through the darkness unknown,
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August 13th 2012, 09:51 PM
So when you think everything is wrong
And you're tired of pretending to be strong
Take another look into the darkness
Try to find the dimming light
As you remember the girl who's life fell apart
All her pain and her bleeding heart
Never forget that this isn't the end
All it takes is for you to just stand up again
*Totally forgot about this 'Til now
"Just open your eyes and see that life is beautiful..." ~Sixx:A.M.
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August 17th 2012, 01:25 AM
Although life can sometimes be quite hard,
don't forget to look up at the stars.
For all the thousands of stars that you see,
each one is a single friend you can meet.
So never let go, and never give up,
even when life seems a little bit tough.
A brighter sun is on it's way,
to turn your steel heart back into clay.
When you can't find your way home,
and when life gets too hard to face on your own.
I will stand as a light through the darkness unknown,
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August 17th 2012, 05:24 AM
and although youre life must come to an end
happyness if just around the bend
so take the path less traveled by
find your way out to the sky
dont be fooled by the senerey
and if you need a hand just talk to me
formerly snowstorm, GoneBeyondRepair, and Breathless in Love
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August 19th 2012, 05:40 PM
just talk to me, and you won't have to be scared.
fear should be the furthest thing from your mind.
this little girl left her past and troubles behind,
so watch out, world, she's coming, beware.
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August 20th 2012, 10:50 AM
With an arrow and some sand
A circle she draws in the ground
'This circle is the world ' She says
Standing in the circle
She sees her life flash before her
Tells herself ' I gotta live this the best I can'
She casts and chants a spell
Feeling free she takes off
'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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August 21st 2012, 01:27 AM
to a place of higer power
she has been found and sheltered
by her Goddess' love
she now feels like a dove
full of peace and happyness
she now sees her lovelyness
formerly snowstorm, GoneBeyondRepair, and Breathless in Love
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September 15th 2012, 06:26 PM
What a beautiful sight it is, that smile.
No one has seen it in a while.
A lovely girl with angel wings
To fly on to better things.
The sunlight is slicing through the clouds,
Erasing every speck of doubt
She spins and twirls in n newfound freedom
Rejoicing the happy girl she's become.
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October 19th 2012, 09:43 PM
Such a wonderful thing, that beautiful grin
It seemed to let the sunshine in
To the dark and gloomy world below
Where it's continuous dark and snow,
But through the oh so cold winter night
Her smile provides the light
Like a break of day
But if I may say
We don't know how long it'll last
"You were given this life because you are strong enough to live it."
Feel free to message me anytime. I would love to talk with you.
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October 20th 2012, 09:57 PM
Even a little light
can keep away the dark
A flicker's all you need
A star, a spark, a heart
And Spongebob isn't relevant;
happiness always is.
Live for love and not for luck
in a flame, a lake, a kiss.