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October 21st 2022, 09:16 PM
Would You Love Me More
a poem about unrequited love
Would you love me more
If I were the plants?
Rich greens, fiery reds, pure whites
Fueling the fresh air, rooting the deep ground
And signing a bright new world
Would you sit amongst me, taking in my beauty?
Would you let me in, and breathe life into you?
As you breathe into me?
Would you love me more
If I were the weather?
Dark, easy skies when your eyes hurt
Cooling, soothing, pattering rain when it's too warm outside
Beaming, beating sun rays when you're feeling cold
Would you look upwards and find shapes in my clouds?
Would you admire me in all of my states?
As I admire all of you?
Would you love me more
If I were your favourite meal?
Fresh vegetables and fruits, to heal your body
Perfectly-cooked meats, to fill your stomach
And perfectly seasoned just how you like it
Would you tell everyone about how good I make you feel?
Would you let my presence comfort you,
As yours does mine?
Would you love me more, I wonder
If I were perfectly crafted to your desires?
The perfect personality, the perfect face and body
Voice, gender, hobbies, and every word perfect and timed just right
Dedicated to you, everything for you
If I can't be what you desire now
If I was anything else
Everything else
Would you love me back?
It's enough to live a live with love until we die
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Re: WYLMM -
October 21st 2022, 09:47 PM
I love all of this but especially the first stanza!
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: WYLMM -
October 22nd 2022, 11:12 AM
This was lovely and I enjoyed reading this too. I liked how you started this and then ended it. Great job, thank you so much for sharing this with us. 
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"Dance is your pulse, your heartbeat,
It’s the rhythm
of your life.
It’s the expression
in time and movement,
in happiness, joy, sadness and envy.
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Laughter. Faith. Hope.
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Re: WYLMM -
October 24th 2022, 06:10 AM
I always love your writing.
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 Jeez, get a life!
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Re: WYLMM -
January 17th 2023, 10:06 PM
I really got taken in by all of this and love it so much! Thanks for sharing 
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