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Heavy World
A poem about depression making me extremely fatigued, and the desire to sleep all of the time.
They say that burdened souls have the weight of the world on their shoulders. I am certainly feeling that weight dragging me deeper and deeper through the earth's crust into the bedrock of the world's inner core. My ankles tied with ball and chain And I sink Sink Sink Deeper down, eyelids fluttering closed Heartbeat slowing, body ever heavier. A world too heavy, too much for these frail bones A life too long, too strong for this glass heart Warping in the heat, and shattering upon impact. In my bed of rot and filth Belongings strewn about and out of place Out of place Out of place just like me I am pulling anvils Pushing solid brick walls Two immovable objects The world is so heavy And I am so tired Always wanting to go back to bed So I stay My eyes are so heavy And I sleep And I sleep And I sleep And I sleep... |
Re: Heavy World
I can relate to this! I want to sleep all the time with my depression too and it feels heavy.
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You did a lovely job writing this and you think about so many things. Thank you for this. :hug:
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I really love this and I can relate to a lot of the emotion in it. Thank you for sharing!
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This is such a great piece.
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One thing I learnt: that everything pulls you when it want. There's no escape.
Awesome poetry. |
Re: Heavy World
I love the opening lines...very descriptive and relatable too. Thank you for sharing :hug:
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