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yungstunna

January 29th 2022 06:20 PM

rainy days

just some dumb short song thingy i wrote a while back :>
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i'm sitting here, watching the rain.
it's kinda calming,
and
i don't know if i should be smiling, or start sobbing.

yet,
i think it's weird, because i'm over here feeling all happy,
but
i don't wanna pour this stuff out,
and sound sappy.

the rain is cold and torturous,
but i don't think i could resist
the chance to dance,
the chance to fly,
the chance to take your heart and make it mine.

or maybe just your spare time.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

January 29th 2022 07:05 PM

Re: rainy days

This isn't dumb!
I really like how this flows.

Mindfulness.

January 30th 2022 07:42 AM

Re: rainy days

This is great! :)

DeletedAccount81

January 30th 2022 09:36 AM

Re: rainy days

I agree with Dez, this isn't dumb!

Well done and feel free to share any more writing if you feel comfortable doing so. :)

Soda_Voxel

January 30th 2022 09:02 PM

Re: rainy days

I really like this! It's really beautiful.

Everglow.

February 7th 2022 09:13 AM

Re: rainy days

I really like what you've written! Thank you for sharing it. I love that the lines are different lengths so it almost has rhythm to it. It flows really well. :)

Arabesque- golfing girl.

March 16th 2022 05:39 PM

Re: rainy days

This was not dumb. I enjoyed reading this and it was lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Celyn

March 21st 2022 04:07 PM

Re: rainy days

Not dumb at all! I really enjoyed reading this, especially the rhyming between 'happy' and 'sappy'. Although it's also not sappy at all to talk about your feelings :)

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