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rainy days -
January 29th 2022, 07:20 PM
just some dumb short song thingy i wrote a while back :>
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i'm sitting here, watching the rain.
it's kinda calming,
and
i don't know if i should be smiling, or start sobbing.
yet,
i think it's weird, because i'm over here feeling all happy,
but
i don't wanna pour this stuff out,
and sound sappy.
the rain is cold and torturous,
but i don't think i could resist
the chance to dance,
the chance to fly,
the chance to take your heart and make it mine.
or maybe just your spare time.
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Re: rainy days -
January 29th 2022, 08:05 PM
This isn't dumb!
I really like how this flows.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: rainy days -
January 30th 2022, 08:42 AM
This is great! 
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Re: rainy days -
January 30th 2022, 10:36 AM
I agree with Dez, this isn't dumb!
Well done and feel free to share any more writing if you feel comfortable doing so.
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Re: rainy days -
January 30th 2022, 10:02 PM
I really like this! It's really beautiful.
It's enough to live a live with love until we die
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Did you miss me?
Outside, huh?
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Re: rainy days -
February 7th 2022, 10:13 AM
I really like what you've written! Thank you for sharing it. I love that the lines are different lengths so it almost has rhythm to it. It flows really well.
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Jeez, get a life!
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Re: rainy days -
March 16th 2022, 06:39 PM
This was not dumb. I enjoyed reading this and it was lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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It’s the rhythm
of your life.
It’s the expression
in time and movement,
in happiness, joy, sadness and envy.
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Re: rainy days -
March 21st 2022, 05:07 PM
Not dumb at all! I really enjoyed reading this, especially the rhyming between 'happy' and 'sappy'. Although it's also not sappy at all to talk about your feelings
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