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Trapped - December 14th 2021, 02:01 AM
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Trapped (Inspired by Astro04)

I’m trapped on this earth
Trapped by its dwellers
Trapped by Their feelings
Caged in
And stuck
No room to breathe
Can’t be Me
Stuck
Stuck
Stuck
I’m trapped by my emotions
Trapped by my thoughts
Trapped by My feelings
Caged in
And stuck
Weighing me down
Can’t be Me
Stuck
Stuck
Stuck
Only one way
To break free
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Re: Trapped - December 14th 2021, 10:05 AM
I really like this piece.

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Re: Trapped - December 14th 2021, 08:49 PM
I really like this one too. It's very simple, but I like that it goes around in a loop which gives the feeling of being trapped. Thank you for sharing.

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Re: Trapped - December 14th 2021, 10:56 PM
I like the repetition of the word stuck!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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Re: Trapped - December 15th 2021, 11:15 AM
This was really good and thank you so much for sharing this with us.

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This was really well written and I love the emphasis on being stuck.

I hope you continue to share more of your work with us.
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Re: Trapped - March 21st 2022, 04:54 PM
I really liked this and feel like I could relate a little, especially the 'can't be me'. Thanks for sharing!

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