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Soda_Voxel August 29th 2021 08:35 PM

Longing Parasite
 
The parasite loves the host
It treasures the way it walks, the places it goes, the foods it eats
It clings to its back, gripping its skin and hair
Relishing every single last thing it does
Sucking out all the life and love it can
It starts to need the host to live
Whenever it sees the host it gets so excited
And runs towards it
But the host does not need nor want the parasite
Not in the way the parasite needs and wants it
And it picks it off and looks for something it would rather have


just a small piece i quickly wrote down because unrequited love go brrrrr

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ August 29th 2021 09:02 PM

Re: Longing Parasite
 
The comparison to a parasite was great!

Astro04 August 30th 2021 11:56 AM

Re: Longing Parasite
 
Literally true. Exactly the right description!

Mindfulness. August 31st 2021 06:11 AM

Re: Longing Parasite
 
I really enjoyed reading this piece.

DeletedAccount81 September 1st 2021 03:45 PM

Re: Longing Parasite
 
Very well written, excellent parallel between unrequited love and a parasite latching onto its host.

But you are not a parasite. :hug:

Celyn September 7th 2021 09:56 AM

Re: Longing Parasite
 
This was really good. I can definitely relate to that parasitic feeling of unrequited love. But I agree with J that you aren't a parasite :)

Arabesque- golfing girl. September 7th 2021 11:56 AM

Re: Longing Parasite
 
This was really good, thank you so much for sharing this with us. :hug:


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