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Soda_Voxel

May 11th 2021 05:21 PM

"Hurt you"

I say that I love you,
And then hurt you time and time again.
I make promises I can't keep,
and then break them a week later.
You mean everything to me,
and yet all I do is break you apart.
What's wrong with me?
Why can't I change, no matter what I do?
It pains me to see my dearest friend hurt.
And it crumbles me to know it's all my fault.

just a short one this time, i dont have the energy for anything better, i'm kind of in the middle of a breakdown, oopsie.

Everglow.

May 11th 2021 07:23 PM

Re: "Hurt you"

I hope writing this helped, even if it was short. As always, I really liked your writing, and sometimes a short poem is most effective.

If you ever need to talk please feel free to message me. I hope you're not on your own during this. :hug:

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

May 11th 2021 08:49 PM

Re: "Hurt you"

I like how you set this up, such as by doing "I say that... (a positive thing)" and then the next line is something that contradicts that, if that makes sense.

Mindfulness.

May 12th 2021 06:32 AM

Re: "Hurt you"

Another great piece of writing. :)

Celyn

May 12th 2021 01:31 PM

Re: "Hurt you"

I feel like I can relate to this a bit. Thanks for sharing and hope you are okay :hug:

.Brittany.

May 12th 2021 03:50 PM

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I hope you're doing okay. Another beautiful piece, you're extremely talented.

Arabesque- golfing girl.

May 23rd 2021 11:08 AM

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Thank you so much for writing this. Sending you.:hug:

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